Can you imagine the world without the Internet? Can you even
fathom not using Facebook or Twitter to consolidate your life, or actually
having to pick up a book to find desired information? Well, according to Hany Rashwan in, “Communication Key to Egypt’s Uprising,” the thoughts of getting
rid of the Internet are close to his mind.
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| Egyptians in Protest for Their Rights |
Rashwan
believes that the Internet is freedom, and having that chance to be free, whoever
you are, is essential. He claims when he heard a statement by Wael Ghonim(a
Middle-Eastern Google executive who started the Facebook group protests), “If
you want to liberate a government, give them the Internet,” he was chilled.
Rashwan is mesmerized with just how lucky we are to have steaming information
at our fingertips, and that it’s free! He talks about it as a form of democracy. You
can convey any image you want about yourself online, even if it’s not socially
acceptable, and it’s considered okay.
This
invention has empowered people Rashwan says, and when Egypt’s Internet was
taken down engineers at Google and Twitter came up with ways to have the
unspeakable voices heard. He believes that it’s this sort of connection, no pun
intended, which is bringing nations together.
I do
believe that the Internet can bring people together, but I also think that it
has caused many problems for us worldwide. This addiction to technology is what
has me weary on this subject. The point I want to communicate is while the
Internet is fascinating, and partly needed for in this society, is it really
necessary?
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| 1969 Computer |
It’s crazy
to think that this global tool, we use today, has been in the workings since
1969. That email wasn’t even created until 1971, by Ray Tomlinson. The Internet
seems to have mysteriously popped up, and we hardly realize the time that was
put into creating it. The World Wide Web
in 1989, the first webcam in 1991, and Google in 1998. I think at this time
people were really focused on making the web for informational and educational
purposes, and once the twenty-first century hit, it got way too fun.
With all
the time you can spend searching for new music, looking up videos, chatting,
and uploading photos you loose the part that makes us all human.
When I was
six I was outside playing in the forest, and now at six we have Facebook accounts.
I believe children at this age especially should not engage in Internet use. I
think it erases the precious time that is needed to play, create and most of
all imagine. Why imagine when everything is already online for you to read or
watch about?
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| "What should I post today?" |
Along with
the Internet taking away childhood development, I believe it's also a resulting
factor of obesity rates and health issues. In a study published by the
Washington Post it showed that music, television, Internet, and other media use
were having a negative effect on children. The correlation between childhood
obesity, drug use, ADHD, lower academic achievement, tobacco use, and even
early sexual behavior were very strong. The data viewed a modern child at
spending 45 hours a week using some form of media. That’s a crazy amount of
time to be spending in virtual reality.
So when
Rashwan says, “that the Internet is bringing people together”, I disagree. I
think there is much more to be know about the effects of all media use. But, as
it stands, I believe it’s having a negative reaction to the human race.



Jasmine, I enjoyed reading your post on this issue. As well as your other post, a reader can easily tell that you put time and effort into thinking about the issue and how you might present it. I like that because it shows your character and detication to the assigment.In this particular assingment, it was refreshing to see a differrent take on the issue because it always allows me to expand my thinking, so thank you for that. However, I can see how the extra information in your response can seem off topic to the real issue at hand and it isnt always clear where your summary ends and your response begins. The effect of technology on society is noteworthy but to me felt some what irrelevant to the heart of the matter. Although you obviously have a strong oppinon that is clear, which i love, i would have liked it to be more focused on the situation at hand.My last critique would have to be that shorter text blocks would make it easier on the eyes to read and not so overwhelming, a critique Sandy gave me which i thought helped me, and i m still working on. You are doing great! keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteJasmine,
ReplyDeleteYou are a very surprising girl! At such a young age you have strong opinions on so many things(not a bad thing), but I do agree with Liz, in that you kind of go off of the topic during your "rant". So my suggestion would be if you were to have a rant, have one then get back to topic, or make sure that your views on the subject are just that, on the subject. No one wants to be confused... But really girl, you are one to watch. I am already subscribed to your posts and have been since day 1! Thanks lady for being fearless and for obviously putting time into your work. It shows!