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My most appreciated comment was from Robert Sappington on my article, "It's the Appeal,". He enjoyed the way I constructed my blog and the way I created key points. I use bold wording on specific terms, that I believe are important in each paragraph, and he liked it. I've only heard two comments apposing the bolding, so overall they've been a success. I think they are great eye-catchers, which many bloggers and newspaper writers use. People like them because they gave attention, instead of lingering away from the article.
Sappington liked my advice on students involving dress code conduct. I stated, "If they have a stance on a certain issue they should be able to support it with reason and facts. I notice how the youth tend to display a statement, but don't fully realize the entire topic." He said that piece of advice was one of the best he's seen in the blogs so far! That meant a lot to me. His only critique was I could try to cut paragraphs apart, so they are easy on the eyes. Thanks Robert!
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I believe my best advice was to Aaron Martineau. His article was a summary about the uprising in Egypt over the internet. I thought Aaron's piece was good if it was strictly a summary, but since it was a response as well, I wasn't satisfied. He's writing was good; however, I wished he would have included more of his opinion and other information. It was sort of dry to me. I wanted to understand why it was an important issue, because if it's not important to the writer then the reader won't be interested. Even if it's not an interest to the writer, they should be able to have a voice about the subject. I think when people are able to tell the reader how it effects them, and could effect you, is when greatness happens. I think Aaron did a good job for a summary though. I appreciated his work and look forward to reading more on his blog. Thanks.
My most appreciated comment was from Robert Sappington on my article, "It's the Appeal,". He enjoyed the way I constructed my blog and the way I created key points. I use bold wording on specific terms, that I believe are important in each paragraph, and he liked it. I've only heard two comments apposing the bolding, so overall they've been a success. I think they are great eye-catchers, which many bloggers and newspaper writers use. People like them because they gave attention, instead of lingering away from the article.
Sappington liked my advice on students involving dress code conduct. I stated, "If they have a stance on a certain issue they should be able to support it with reason and facts. I notice how the youth tend to display a statement, but don't fully realize the entire topic." He said that piece of advice was one of the best he's seen in the blogs so far! That meant a lot to me. His only critique was I could try to cut paragraphs apart, so they are easy on the eyes. Thanks Robert!
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I believe my best advice was to Aaron Martineau. His article was a summary about the uprising in Egypt over the internet. I thought Aaron's piece was good if it was strictly a summary, but since it was a response as well, I wasn't satisfied. He's writing was good; however, I wished he would have included more of his opinion and other information. It was sort of dry to me. I wanted to understand why it was an important issue, because if it's not important to the writer then the reader won't be interested. Even if it's not an interest to the writer, they should be able to have a voice about the subject. I think when people are able to tell the reader how it effects them, and could effect you, is when greatness happens. I think Aaron did a good job for a summary though. I appreciated his work and look forward to reading more on his blog. Thanks.
Allison-
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