The Best Comment I Received:
The best common that I got was from Liz. She liked that my counterclaims weren't long and were easy to understand. Liz thinks that privacy is a complex issue, and when she posts a picture online what it can mean to another. The story that I include about a spanish teacher getting suspended for inappropriate pictures online shocked her. She wondered why exactly they fired her, and that she can understand if she were actually doing something illegal. Cyberbullying was another issue that intrigued her. She questioned how I would combat and address it in my paper. Lastly she remembered of past experiences where she was cyberbullied online through hate messages, and that it's easy to break one down online rather than face to face.
The Best Comment I Gave:
The best comment that I gave was to Shane, on his counterclaims about Smartphones. I thought that his article was really interesting, because I can totally relate to him. He explains heading to a coffee shop, and forgetting his laptop; however, since he had his smartphone he could do his business from that convenience. Although this convenience can be helpful, it can also be a distraction, which I stated. My roommate constantly is online and on her smartphone, which gets annoying. I feel like she doesn't hear what I have to say, and it's really frustrating when I want to tell her something. Shane says that not paying attention to his phone, even for a minute, helped him realize that distraction. I thought his paper was interesting, fun, and inventive.
Below are the comments I gave on five other blogs pertaining to the counterclaims.
Simone-
November 24, 2012 12:07 PM
Eve-
November 24, 2012 3:03 PM
Korey-
November 24, 2012 3:16 PM
Shane-
November 24, 2012 3:32 PM
Justin-
November 24, 2012 3:43 PM

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